What happened in Australia
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I went Australia when I 19 years old. and it was winter. (Jan)
In fact, I don\'t like cold. But the Australia was summer! I\'m so happy :)
After when I arrived in Melbourne, I went to EUREKA SKYDECK88 that is observatory.
When I went up building on top, landscape of Melbourne was very gorgeous!
That is my best memory in Australia.
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Hi [이름]. I\'m glad to know that you had a great vacation! :)
- T. Gabby :)
I went Australia when I 19 years old. and it was winter. (Jan)
>> I went to Australia when I was 19 years old. It was winter in January.
In fact, I don\'t like cold. But the Australia was summer! I\'m so happy :)
In fact, I don\'t like cold. But the Australia was summer! I\'m so happy :)
>> In fact, I don\'t feel cold because it was summer back then. I was so happy. :)
After when I arrived in Melbourne, I went to EUREKA SKYDECK88 that is observatory.
After when I arrived in Melbourne, I went to EUREKA SKYDECK88 that is observatory.
>> As I arrived in Melbourne, I went to EUREKA SKYDECK88 that is an observatory.
When I went up building on top, landscape of Melbourne was very gorgeous!
When I went up building on top, landscape of Melbourne was very gorgeous!
>> When I went up on top of the building, the landscape of Melbourne is very gorgeous!
That is my best memory in Australia.
That is my best memory in Australia.
>> That\'s my most memorable experience in Australia.
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