What happy memories do you have of your birthday parties?
학생이 쓴 원문
My happy memory about birthday party is that I was celebrated at a restaurant near my house when I was 8 years old.
It was nice to have many children together.
I was happy to receive many birthday gifts.
I liked the pasta because it was delicious.
It was good to play until late.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
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~ Teacher Tricia
My happy memory about birthday party is that I had birthday party at a restaurant near my house when I was 8 years old.
>>> My happy memory about a birthday party is that I celebrated it at a restaurant near my house when I was 8 years old.
It was nice to have many children together.
>>> CORRECT!
I was happy to receive many birthday gifts.
>>> CORRECT!
I liked the pasta because it was delicious.
>>> CORRECT!
It was good to play until late
>>> It was good to play until late.
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