What harm does pollution do to the environment?
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nvironment Pollution rising up these days after occurring COVID.
>>Environmental pollution
is rising these days due to the occurrence of COVID.
Environment groups be criticizing that we use too
many coals as we lives now.
>>Environmental groups are
criticizing the excessive use of coal in our current lifestyles.
Because of Using plastic, many electric products,
their own cars.
>>Many electronic products
and their own cars are being used, leading to the usage of plastic.
We should face the facts our problems.
>>We should confront the
realities of our problems.
We already be experiencing irregular weather
conditions and strange scorching temperatures
>>We are already experiencing irregular weather conditions and unusual scorching temperatures.
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