What has been the best amusement park you have ever visited?

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Here are my corrections for you:

When I was a kid, I went to the everland in Korea with my family. 

>> When I was a kid, I went to Everland in Korea with my family.

OR

>> When I was a kid, me and my family went to Everland in Korea.

That was lots of flowers, animals and riders. 

>> There were lots of flowers, animals, and riders. 

I played there all day long and I enjoyed quite a lot. 

>> I played there all day long and I enjoyed our stay there quite a lot.

It was fun memory. 

>> It was a fun memory.

I would like to go there again.

>> CORRECT!