What has been the greatest adventure of your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have tried to live my life to the fullest. I wanted not to spend even a second without doing anything. Living an idle life makes me feel guilty and anxious. I’ve set up goals every year and actually made efforts to achieve them since I started my professional career after graduating from college. So, I could obtain a MBA degree, an Information Processing Engineer license, and CPA. However, I haven’t done any noticeable or memorable things since 2012. What I remember is just going to work and coming back home. A day, a week, a month, and a year have passed. Even this year, I feel like I just started a new year, but it’s already mid-June. A half year has already gone away. I feel somewhat regretful and disappointed about myself for killing the valuable time. Thinking about how to live life more meaningfully, there are lots of things we can try. We can learn new things like golfing, inline skating, playing drums or piano, painting. We can go to school to sharpen your knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir [이름]!
Good afternoon! We are almost done with the week.
Thanks for sharing a lot of things in writing.
You are right! Time is really fast. ^^
I hope that you will have something memorable before the year ends.
Have a wonderful day.
Teacher Nina
I have tried to live my life to the fullest.
>> corect
I wanted not to spend even a second without doing anything.
>> corect
Living an idle life makes me feel guilty and anxious.
>> corect
I’ve set up goals every year and actually made efforts to achieve them since I started my professional career after graduating from college.
>> correct
So, I could obtain a MBA degree, an Information Processing Engineer license, and CPA.
>> So, I could obtain an MBA degree, an Information Processing Engineer license, and a CPA.
However, I haven’t done any noticeable or memorable things since 2012.
>> correct
What I remember is just going to work and coming back home.
>> correct
A day, a week, a month, and a year have passed.
>> correct
Even this year, I feel like I just started a new year, but it’s already mid-June.
>> correct
A half year has already gone away.
>> Half of the year has already passed.
I feel somewhat regretful and disappointed about myself for killing the valuable time.
>> correct
Thinking about how to live life more meaningfully, there are lots of things we can try.
>> correct
We can learn new things like golfing, inline skating, playing drums or piano, painting.
>> correct
We can go to school to sharpen your knowledge.
>> correct
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