What has changed in your life since last year?
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I think a lot of things were changed in my life since last year.
First, my height was 152cm but now I am 166cm, and also my weight was 40kg but now I am 57kg.
Second, I don\'t know actually but my maximum speed of baseball ball was 75km/h, but now I am more than 90km/h.
Third, I had a lot of freinds, but now I don\'t have that much friends becasue of COVID-19.
Fourth, I think today me is better than one year ago me.
Actually, I was very serious about every thing, but now I am not that serious about every thing.
And one year ago, I had a strong desire to win but now, I am enjoying the sports.
I think these kinds of things were changed in my life since last year.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Those are great improvements! Every year is always a door for a better self. Take this advantage and always seek growth in your life. :)
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I think a lot of things were changed in my life since last year.
>> I think a lot of things changed in my life since last year.
First, my height was 152cm but now I am 166cm, and also my weight was 40kg but now I am 57kg.
>> First, my height was 152cm but now I am 166cm. My weight was 40 kg but now it is 57 kg.
Second, I don\'t know actually but my maximum speed of baseball ball was 75km/h, but now I am more than 90km/h.
>> Second, I don\'t know exactly but my maximum speed while playing baseball ball was 75km/h, but now I am more than 90km/h.
Third, I had a lot of freinds, but now I don\'t have that much friends becasue of COVID-19.
>> Third is that, before I had lots of friends but now I don\'t have much because of the pandemic.
Fourth, I think today me is better than one year ago me.
>> Fourth is that I think that I am a better version of myself now that a year ago.
Actually, I was very serious about every thing, but now I am not that serious about every thing.
>> CORRECT
And one year ago, I had a strong desire to win but now, I am enjoying the sports.
>> I also had a strong desire to win all the time before but now I just enjoy playing sports regardless if I win or not.
I think these kinds of things were changed in my life since last year.
>> I think these are the things that changed in my life since last year.
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