What has changed in your life since last year?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I changed from a middle school student to a high school student. And I met more people. Secondly, the amount of studying that I have to do has increased.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Congrats on moving up! I think all of these are great because you are opening a new door for new experiences. :)
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First, I changed from a middle school student to a high school student.
>> CORRECT
And I met more people.
>> I also met more people.
Secondly, the amount of studying that I have to do has increased.
>>CORRECT
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