What have made you look pale?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I cannot with my daughter who lives in Japan, my face turns pale.
I am worried about whether she is adjusting well in abroad.
Because she is too weak and slow.
The fashion school that she attends is famous for many assignments and strict curriculum.
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Hi [이름],
Thank you again for sharing your ideas!
Have a nice morning!
Teacher ELLY.
What have made you look pale?
When I cannot with my daughter who lives in Japan, my face turns pale.
>>When I think about my daughter living in Japan, my face turns pale.
I am worried about whether she is adjusting well in abroad.
I am worried about whether she is adjusting well in abroad.
>>I am worried about whether she is adjusting well abroad.
Because she is too weak and slow.
Because she is too weak and slow.
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or>>Since she a weak and slow person.
The fashion school that she attends is famous for many assignments and strict curriculum.
The fashion school that she attends is famous for many assignments and strict curriculum.
>>The fashion school that she attends is famous for their strict curriculum and many assignments.
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