What have you been up to this past New Year's day?(ANSWER)
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What have you been up to this past New Year’s Day?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I actually
forgot what I did at New Year\'s day, but I only remember my grandfather\'s
house was filled with my relations.
The day was wonderful, and we played the game, called \'Yut.\'
It was fun. Also I remember our team wins.
I met my cousins, and played with them.
I ate a lot of delicious things and I gained weight..
:)
CORRECTIONS:
I actually forgot what I did on New
Year’s Day, I only remember my grandfather\'s house was
filled with my relations.
The day was wonderful, and we played the game called, \'Yut.\'
It was fun. Also, I remember our team won.
I met my cousins and
played with them.
I ate a lot of delicious foods and I gained weight.
:)
.
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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