What have you been up to this past New Year's day?(ANSWER)

2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I actually forgot what I did at New Year's day, but I only remember my grandfather's house was filled with my relations. The day was wonderful, and we played the game, called 'Yut.' It was fun. Also I remember our team wins. I met my cousins, and played with them. I ate a lot of delicious things and I gained weight.. :) -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 


HOMEWORK:

 

What have you been up to this past New Year’s Day?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:


I actually forgot what I did at New Year\'s day, but I only remember my grandfather\'s house was filled with my relations.
The day was wonderful, and we played the game, called \'Yut.\'
It was fun. Also I remember our team wins.
I met my cousins, and played with them.
I ate a lot of delicious things and I gained weight..
:)

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I actually forgot what I did on New Year’s Day, I only remember my grandfather\'s house was filled with my relations.
The day was wonderful, and we played the
game called, \'Yut.\'
It was fun. Also
, I remember our team won.
I met my
cousins and played with them.
I ate a lot of delicious
foods and I gained weight.
:)

.

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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