What have you decided to do this school vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan in summer vacation.
I will swim in the beach, and eat Korean big crab and sasimi.
And I afraid getting a shot, but I must do that.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jimmy!
Here\'s your revised composition from last Friday\'s homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as \"at the beach\" or \"in the ocean\". See you again on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What have you decided to do this school vacation?
I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan in summer vacation.
>> I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan on summer vacation.
I will swim in the beach, and eat Korean big crab and sasimi.
>> I will swim at the beach, and eat Korean king crabs and sashimi.
>> or: I will swim in the ocean, and eat Korean king crabs and sashimi.
And I afraid getting a shot, but I must do that.
>> And I\'m afraid of getting a shot, but I must do it.
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