What have you learned from past failures?
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Hello, Kimberly! Good job on accomplishing your homework. Thank you for sharing this experience, and I totally understand what you felt. As a student, I also underestimated the level of difficulty of the test that I didn\'t bother to study. Unfortunately, my mind was not prepared for the questions, so I failed. I learned that failure doesn\'t define us. It is a way for us to improve and do better next time.
See you in class! ^^
~ Teacher Gela
When I was an elementary school student, I had a test.
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So, I had to study to get good grades.
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However, I didn\'t study hard because I thought that the test will not be difficult.
>> However, I didn\'t study hard because I thought that the test would not be difficult.
But it was just my illusion.
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The test was so hard.
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OR >> The test was difficult.
So, I couldn\'t get good grades and my parents looked disappointed.
>> So, I didn\'t get good grades, and my parents looked disappointed.
At that moment, I was shocked and decided to study hard.
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So, I got good grades on the next test.
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Like this, I learned that practice makes perfect.
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OR >> From this, I learned that practice makes perfect.
I hope that I study hard and get good grades in the future.
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