What have you lost while traveling?

2020-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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In oversea traveling case, I rarely lost my belongings. I suppose I intend to be nervous in overseas. But in domestic traveling, I sometimes lost my ones, or don\'t bring that at home. In last traveling in JeJu island (I might mention before), I lost charger for smartphone. I leaved that in hotel and checked out and moved to far place.... As I think money and smartphone are the most important things in traveling, I should buy new one (including USB cable...) I was sad to pay money. But I though it was better to lose my wallet (money....)

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this.

- T. Beth
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In oversea traveling case, I rarely lost my belongings.

>>> OR: For overseas traveling, I have never lost my belongings.
I suppose I intend to be nervous in overseas.

>>> I suppose I tend to be nervous and alert being overseas.
But in domestic traveling, I sometimes lost my ones, or don\'t bring that at home.

>>> But in domestic traveling, I sometimes lost some, or forgot to bring them from home.

In last traveling in JeJu island (I might mention before), I lost charger for smartphone.

>>> On my last travel to JeJu island (I might have mentioned before), I lost the charger for my smartphone.

I leaved that in hotel and checked out and moved to far place....

>>> I left it at the hotel, checked out then moved to a far location.
As I think money and smartphone are the most important things in traveling, I should buy new one (including USB cable...)

>>> As I thought money and smartphone are the most important things when traveling, I bought a new one (including USB cable...)

I was sad to pay money.

>>> OR: I was sad to spend my money on it.

But I though it was better to lose my wallet (money....)

>>> But I thought it was better than losing my wallet (money).

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