What have you lost while traveling?

2023-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I lost my phone charge. Fortunately it was short traveling, so I didn\'t feel uncomfortable. But I felt annoy that buy it again. Although the travel was perfect, I remained bad memory. so I was sad.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Kevin,
You now know that not all memorable trips are good, there can be sad ones too. May this be a lesson for us when we travel next time. 
In my case,  I lost my luggage when I had my local trips. fortunately, I was able to get it back in an hour but imagine that time instead of having fun, we were busy searching for my luggage. From then on, I started putting tags on my bags with my name and contact number on it. I\'ve learned my lesson :)
See you!
T. Aki~

I lost my phone charge. Fortunately it was short traveling, so I didn\'t feel uncomfortable.
>>> I lost my phone charger. Fortunately, it was a short journey, so I didn\'t feel uncomfortable.

But I felt annoy that buy it again.
>>> But I felt annoyed that I have to buy it again.

Although the travel was perfect, I remained bad memory. so I was sad
>>> CORRECT!

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