What have you lost while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have white skin.
I lost my white skin when my honeymoon.
It was cloudy when I stayed in Bali, so I ignored ultra violet.
I don\'t use protecting UV, so I lost my original skin tone.
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I have white skin.
>> Correct
OR >> I have fair skin.
I lost my white skin when my honeymoon.
>> I lost my fair complexion during my honeymoon.
OR >> My skin became less fair after my honeymoon.
It was cloudy when I stayed in Bali, so I ignored ultra violet.
>> It was cloudy when I stayed in Bali, so I ignored ultraviolet rays.
I don\'t use protecting UV, so I lost my original skin tone.
>> I didn\'t use any UV protection, so I lost my original skin tone.
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