What have you lost while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
After travel, I usually lost my original skin color.
Because, I was hardly exposed ultraviolet rays in ordinary days.
However, during travel I was exposed ultraviolet rays a lot, so my skin was damaged.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
After travel, I usually lost my original skin color. Because, I was hardly exposed ultraviolet rays in ordinary days.
>> After traveling, I usually lose my original skin color because I am rarely exposed to ultraviolet rays on ordinary days.
However, during travel I was exposed ultraviolet rays a lot, so my skin was damaged.
>> However, during travel, I am exposed to a lot of ultraviolet rays, which damages my skin.
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