What have you lost while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
I haven\'t lost anything important, but I have almost lost my cell phone in Japan a few years ago.
At that time I was an exchange student, so when my mother came to meet me, I guided her.
I accidentaly left my cell phone on a subway seat, and I realized it when we got off.
I panicked a lot because I couldn\'t guide her without my cell phone.
Fortunately, I found it in the subway station because one kind staff kept it safe.
Since that time, I have been checking my belongings before leaving places.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You did an excellent job sharing your personal experience clearly! I like how your story had a beginning, middle, and end. It was easy to follow and very relatable. Just remember to double-check small spelling errors like “accidentally” and try to combine short sentences for smoother flow. Overall, you did a great job expressing your experience naturally!
~Teacher Polly
>>I haven’t lost anything important, but I almost lost my cell phone in Japan a few years ago.
At that time I was an exchange student, so when my mother came to meet me, I guided her.
>>CORRECT
OR>>At that time, I was an exchange student, and when my mother came to meet me, I guided her around.
I accidentaly left my cell phone on a subway seat, and I realized it when we got off.
>>I accidentally left my cell phone on a subway seat and realized it only after we got off.
I panicked a lot because I couldn\'t guide her without my cell phone.
>>CORRECT
Fortunately, I found it in the subway station because one kind staff kept it safe.
>>Fortunately, I found it at the subway station because a kind staff member had kept it safe for me.
Since that time, I have been checking my belongings before leaving places.
>>Since then, I have always checked my belongings before leaving any place.
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