What he would like and dislike

2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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In fact, it has passed 15 monthes since I moved to this town in which I live. So I think I'm still a stranger about this town. However, I am sure he would like it because it has a big public park with some facilities in the center of the town.He will be able to enjoy playing tennis, jogging, walking his dog and so on. Furthermore, while participating in those activities, he can make friends and keep healthy. Nevertheless, there could be something that he would dislike. T

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework, Mr. [이름]^^ I am so happy to hear your voice every morning :) Thank you for your \"positivity virus\", ha! ha!  In fact, it has passed 15 monthes since I moved to this town in which I live. >>In fact, 15 months has passed since I moved to this town in which I live. So I think I\'m still a stranger about this town. >>So I think I\'m still a stranger in this town. >>In fact, 15 months has passed since I moved to this town in which I live, so I think I\'m still a stranger here. >>Actually, it has only been 15 months since I moved to this town, so I think I\'m still a stranger here.  However, I am sure he would like it because it has a big public park with some facilities in the center of the town. >>CORRECT! He will be able to enjoy playing tennis, jogging, walking his dog and so on. >>CORRECT!  Furthermore, while participating in those activities, he can make friends and keep healthy. >>Furthermore, while participating in those activities, he can make friends and keep himself healthy.Nevertheless, there could be something that he would dislike. >>CORRECT!

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