What health problems do you worry about most?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have hypertension and take some medicine.
As getting older, it would be worse and lead to complication .
So I am worry about brain vessel disease.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Please take note of the balance in your sentences.
You have to know when to use pronouns to convey another idea.
Constant practice is the key.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have hypertension and take some medicine.
>> I have hypertension and I take some medicine.
As getting older, it would be worse and lead to complication .
As getting older, it would be worse and lead to complication .
>> As I get older, it could become worse and it could lead to complications.
So I am worry about brain vessel disease.
So I am worry about brain vessel disease.
>> So, I\'m worried about brain vessels disease.
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