What healthy food do you eat after exercising?
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After exercising I need to eat protein for keeping my muscle. During exercising I might loss lots of energy, I feel hungry, The best food is chicken breast or egg. I sometimes eat energy bar. Eating too much carbohydrate is not that goo.
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It is inspiring, [이름]! It is important to take care of our bodies. Stay fit and healthy!-Faith-
After exercising I need to eat protein for keeping my muscle. >> After exercising, I need to eat protein to maintain my muscles.
During exercising I might loss lots of energy, I feel hungry,
>> While exercising, I may lose lots of energy and I may feel hungry.
The best food is chicken breast or egg.
>> Therefore, the best food to eat is chicken breast or egg.
I sometimes eat energy bar.
>> CORRECT
Eating too much carbohydrate is not that goo.
>> Eating too many carbohydrates is not that good.
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