What healthy life choices did you make this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to practice golf at the gym. I had gone to the gym daily until October of this year. Since I went to a business trip, the golf practice was stopped. A few years ago, I used to exercise working out. But now I like golf more than exercise.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I used to practice golf at the gym.
>>CORRECT!
2. I had gone to the gym daily until October of this year.
>>CORRECT!
3. Since I went to a business trip, the golf practice was stopped.
>>Ever since I went to a business trip, the golf practice was stopped.
4. A few years ago, I used to exercise working out.
>>A few years ago, I used to exercise and work out.
5. But now I like golf more than exercise.
>>Now, I like golf more than exercising.
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