What historical sites did you visit and what did you learn?
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I saw Stone Pagoda at Mireuksa Temple Site, which is located near my maternal grandmother\'s house. I saw it a few years ago and it was under construction. The pagoda was built nearly 2000 years ago so I was overwhelmed. I must have learnt something there but I can\'t remember. Later, I heard something is found inside the pagoda but I don\'t remember what it was.
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I saw Stone Pagoda at Mireuksa Temple Site, which is located near my maternal grandmother\'s house.
>> The Stone Pagoda at Mireuksa Temple Site, which is close to the home of my mother\'s grandmother, caught my attention.
I saw it a few years ago and it was under construction.
>> Correct!
OR: It was still under construction when I last saw it a few years ago.
The pagoda was built nearly 2000 years ago so I was overwhelmed.
>> Correct!
OR: I was overwhelmed by the fact that the pagoda had been built nearly 2000 years ago.
I must have learnt something there but I can\'t remember.
>> Correct!
OR: I think I learned something there, but I can\'t remember.
Later, I heard something is found inside the pagoda but I don\'t remember what it was.
>> Correct!
OR: Later, I heard that something was discovered inside the pagoda, but I can\'t remember what it was.
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