What hobbies are popular with children, but not with adults?
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Origami is popular with children, but not with adults. Because when I was young, many boys used to make tops and knives from origami. I have never seen adults do origami as a hobby. Of course, the reason why I don\'t do origami these days is because it\'s not fun and it\'s become boring.
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Origami is popular with children, but not with adults.
>>> CORRECT!
Because when I was young, many boys used to make tops and knives from origami.
>>> CORRECT!
I have never seen adults do origami as a hobby.
>>> CORRECT!
Of course, the reason why I don\'t do origami these days is because it\'s not fun and it\'s become boring.
>>> Of course, the reason why I don\'t do origami these days is that it\'s not fun and it\'s become boring.
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