What hobbies do you enjoy? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My hobby are drawing art and listning to music!
I like drawing picture, because I like ma[이름] my own things.
And I like listning to music and singing song, because music is comfort me or sometime music is make me happy or feel good.
So, I like drawing art and listening to music!
강사 첨삭
Hi Da [이름]! ^^ Thanks for doing your homework again! Learn while writing okay?! Continue to be a kind student! See you!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
My hobby are drawing art and listning to music!
>>> My hobbies are drawing and listening to music.
I like drawing picture, because I like ma[이름] my own things.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
And I like listning to music and singing song, because music is comfort me or sometime music is make me happy or feel good.
>>> And I like listening to music and singing a song because music comforts me or sometimes music makes me happy or feel good.
So, I like drawing art and listening to music!
>>> My hobbies are drawing and listening to music.
I like drawing picture, because I like ma[이름] my own things.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
And I like listning to music and singing song, because music is comfort me or sometime music is make me happy or feel good.
>>> And I like listening to music and singing a song because music comforts me or sometimes music makes me happy or feel good.
So, I like drawing art and listening to music!
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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