What hobbies would you like to try soon?
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, many pepple do various things for their hobbies. And for me, I would like to buy my diary and start to write it. Actually, I used to write my diary so that I can plan for weekends and record my emotions. But I have never used my diary by the end. I mean, I\'ve always stopped in the middle, and just forgotten about the existence of it. That\'s why I have a desire for it. Because I will go to school soon, on september, I\'m planning to buy a new one and use it for upcoming semester.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Su In! That sounds wonderful! It’s great that you want to start journaling again; having a diary is such a helpful way to plan and reflect. I’m sure your new diary will be a great companion for the upcoming semester!
~T. Jenna
Recently, many pepple do various things for their hobbies.
>>Recently, many people do various things for their hobbies.
And for me, I would like to buy my diary and start to write it.
>>As for me, I would like to buy a diary and start writing in it.
Actually, I used to write my diary so that I can plan for weekends and record my emotions.
>>Actually, I used to write in my diary so that I could plan my weekends and record my emotions.
But I have never used my diary by the end.
>>But I never used my diary until the end.
I mean, I\'ve always stopped in the middle, and just forgotten about the existence of it.
>>I mean, I always stopped in the middle and just forgot about its existence.
That\'s why I have a desire for it.
>>That\'s why I have a desire to use it again.
Because I will go to school soon, on september, I\'m planning to buy a new one and use it for upcoming semester.
>>Because I will go to school soon, in September, I\'m planning to buy a new one and use it for the upcoming semester.
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Recently, many people engage in various hobbies. Personally, I would like to purchase a diary and begin writing in it again. I used to maintain a diary to organize my weekends and reflect on my emotions, but I never managed to keep it consistently. I would often stop midway and eventually forget about it. That’s why I am eager to start again. Since I will be returning to school in September, I plan to get a new diary and use it systematically throughout the upcoming semester.
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