What hobby do you think would surprise people about you and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
People are a little suprised about my playing tennis .As getting old, we are not to try playing tennis.
The why is dangerous than golf ,many people prefer to play golf
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! I am also surprised that you play tennis despite your age. I admire you for that! ^^ Have a fun holiday today!
~T. Jewel
People are a little suprised about my playing tennis .
>>People are a little surprised by me playing tennis.
As getting old, we are not to try playing tennis.
>>As we get older, we should not try to play tennis.
OR
>>As we age, we may find it harder to play tennis.
The why is dangerous than golf ,
The why is dangerous than golf ,
>>This is why it is more dangerous than golf.
many people prefer to play golf
>>Many people prefer to play golf.
OR
>>A lot of people prefer playing golf.
>>A lot of people prefer playing golf.
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