What hobby would you like to try?

2024-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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I have dreamed of building a wooden house. I desire to have a cabin house. When I have free time, I have tried finding out a place where to build the cabin. I have watched YouTube about Carpenter. I want to know how they work, what tools they use, which place is good place to build the cabin house. However earning money is most important thing to build a house. So, I work hard for my future.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]i!

Fascinating! I think that would be great to build in the countryside. But you\'re right, saving money for it will be one of the first steps. Almost every hobby costs a penny now.

~ Trixia

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I have dreamed of building a wooden house.

- CORRECT.

I desire to have a cabin house.

- CORRECT.

When I have free time, I have tried finding out a place where to build the cabin.

- When I have free time, I have tried to find a place to build the cabin.

I have watched YouTube about Carpenter.

- I have watched a YouTube about Carpenter.

I want to know how they work, what tools they use, which place is good place to build the cabin house.

- I want to know how they work, what tools they use, and which place is a good place to build the cabin house.

However earning money is most important thing to build a house. So, I work hard for my future.

- However, earning money is the most important thing when building a house. So, I work hard for my future.

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