What holiday do you think is no longer needed in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
We have a parents day. But it isn\'t holiday. Parents day is April 8th every year. It is Tuesday this year. Even parents day we can\'t meet our parents bacause we have to work. So we visit our parents before. I hope that parents day to be holiday. If parents was holiday, we can visit our parents and have a good time. These days we are living busy life, so we not enough to spend time with our parents. Special day we want to meet special people.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
That\'s true! Parents\' Day should be a holiday to appreciate what parents are doing for us.
I am really wondering about Children\'s Day. Why does Korea have a holiday like this? I\'m puzzled ^^
See you in class!
Aki~
We have a parents day. But it isn\'t holiday
>>> We have a Parents\' Day, but it isn\'t a holiday.
Parents day is April 8th every year. It is Tuesday this year.
>>> Parents\' Day is on April 8th every year. It is Tuesday this year.
Even parents day we can\'t meet our parents bacause we have to work. So we visit our parents before.
>>> Even on Parents\' Day, we can\'t meet our parents because we have to work. So we visit our parents a day before.
I hope that parents day to be holiday.
>>> I hope that Parents\' Day becomes a holiday.
If parents was holiday, we can visit our parents and have a good time.
>> If Parents Day is a holiday, we can visit our parents and have a good time.
These days we are living busy life, so we not enough to spend time with our parents.
>>> These days we are living a busy life, so we don\'t have enough time to spend with our parents.
Special day we want to meet special people.
>>> A special day, where we want to meet special people.
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