What holidays do you celebrate? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Thanksgiving day is worldwide festival which is always in fall.
Around this time every-year, I had dropped by my grandparents cemetery which is located in KB province with my family.
On our way to cemetery, We can get a chance to see various maple trees with red and yellow leaves on the low mountain.
I hope that this colorful season keep going in long period in our country.
강사 첨삭
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Thanksgiving day is worldwide festival which is always in fall.
>>>Thanksgiving day is a nationwide festival that always happens in fall.
Around this time every-year, I had dropped by my grandparents cemetery which is located in KB province with my family.
>>> Around this time of the year, I drop by my grandparents\' cemetery which is located in KB province with my family.
On our way to cemetery, We can get a chance to see various maple trees with red and yellow leaves on the low mountain.
>>> On our way to cemetery, we can get a chance to see various maple trees with red and yellow leaves on the low mountains.
I hope that this colorful season keep going in long period in our country.
>>> Around this time of the year, I drop by my grandparents\' cemetery which is located in KB province with my family.
On our way to cemetery, We can get a chance to see various maple trees with red and yellow leaves on the low mountain.
>>> On our way to cemetery, we can get a chance to see various maple trees with red and yellow leaves on the low mountains.
I hope that this colorful season keep going in long period in our country.
>>>I hope that this colorful season keep going for a long period in our country.
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