What i\'am afraid of
학생이 쓴 원문
I am afraid of heights and taking airplanes. I always hypnotize myself that nothing bad will happen, every time I fly in planes or have a situation to go to high places. When I think about why I’m afraid of it, it’s the fear of death in my opinion. But I don’t understand the people who are not scared of it. Maybe they are hiding their fears.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ki, good day to you! It is normal to be afraid of something. I\'m glad that you are able to share it openly with me. Just remember that \"Fears are not there to scare you, they are there to let you know that something is worth it.\" We will talk more in class. I will see you then. Always take good care of yourself!~T. Lyn
I am afraid of heights and taking airplanes.
>>I\'m afraid of heights such as going to high places and taking airplanes.
I always hypnotize myself that nothing bad will happen, every time I fly in planes or have a situation to go to high places.
>>Whenever I have to get on a plane or go to a high place, I always convince myself that nothing bad will happen.
When I think about why I’m afraid of it, it’s the fear of death in my opinion.
>>If I think about the reason why I\'m afraid of those things, it is because of the fear of death.
But I don’t understand the people who are not scared of it.
>>But I don\'t understand those people who are not afraid of anything.
Maybe they are hiding their fears.
>>Correct.
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