What I am most like to change about where I live
학생이 쓴 원문
I would be to change my room.
Because there are still many textbooks and high school things.
I will change there, So my room will be neat.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! Thank you for sending me your composition. I understand that you need more space to put your new things in your room. It is a good feeling when you see new things and new surroundings. I\'ll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I would be to change my room.
>>I would like to change my room.
Because there are still many textbooks and high school things.
Because there are still many textbooks and high school things.
>>It is because I still have a lot of textbooks and high school stuff in here.
I will change there, So my room will be neat.
I will change there, So my room will be neat.
>>I will change everything in my room, so that it will be neat and tidy.
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