What I did.

2011-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I drawed six story board the SK Constructure's apartment and found pictures about the Korean Mutual Aid Coperates Associate. At four thirty pm, I enjoyed a meeting. This meeting was ended without discusion. My team determine to have a meeting one more on this friday. I will prepared more idea and key visuals. ps. I fell in deep sleep. Sorry ma'am. See you tommorow.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday! It\'s been nice talking with you. It was great checking your composition that you have sent. I hope you keep sending them for me to help in giving corrections if there are. Advance happy New Year. Teacher Faye   I drawed six story board the SK Constructure\'s apartment and found pictures about the Korean Mutual Aid Coperates Associate. >> I drew six story board the SK Contracture\'s apartment and found pictures about the Korean Mutual Aid Cooperates Associate. At four thirty pm, I enjoyed a meeting. >> At four thirty pm, I have enjoyed a meeting. This meeting was ended without discusion. >> This meeting ended without discussion. My team determine to have a meeting one more on this friday. >> My teams determine to have a meeting one more on this Friday. I will prepared more idea and key visuals. >> I will prepare more idea and key visuals. ps. I fell in deep sleep. Sorry ma\'am. See you tommorow. >> Ps. I fell deep asleep. Sorry ma\'am. See you tomorrow.  

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