What I did do today
학생이 쓴 원문
I meet my friend early this morning.
We play in bounce kids cafe.
And when I arrive at hotel, my mom, dad
and me swim.
It was so fun day.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Great job on your first homework. You did great in creating your own sentences.
Great job on your first homework. You did great in creating your own sentences.
See you tomorrow!
~ T. Demi ^^
~ T. Demi ^^
I meet my friend early this morning.
>> I met my friend early this morning.
We play in bounce kids cafe.
We play in bounce kids cafe.
>> We played in Bounce Kid\'s Cafe.
And when I arrive at hotel, my mom, dad
and me swim.
And when I arrive at hotel, my mom, dad
and me swim.
>> And when I arrived at the hotel, my mom, dad and I swam.
It was so fun day.
It was so fun day.
>> It was so fun today.
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