What I did during Chuseok holidays

2018-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I CANNOT BELIEVE THE HOLIDAYS OVER ALREADY! I feel not really satisfied with what I did during the holidays. Becuz it's not enough! Actually, I slept too much. That caused this disappointment in the end. First day, I went to motorcycle tour with my friends. That was the best day among those holidays. I really enjoyed the winding course which normally I was a little afraid before. I felt my motorcycle getting more comfortable to deal with. And the weather killed. It was awesome. I was wearing leather jacket all day long but it was not hot at all with cool air. And the second day, becuz of the previous day 12 hours riding, I was not even able to walk properly, so I stayed at home all day long. And the next day it was Chuseok day, but I didn't visit anyone, just went to see my boyfriend. I desperately wanted to ride motorcyle again, but....ㅠㅠ Anyway, I was glad and felt sorry at the same time with mixed feeling, cuz he prepared some Chuseok gift for my parents even though he's ....

강사 첨삭

Hi there Min!(\",)

He\'s what? I think your last sentence was cut-off. Thank you for spending time writing this composition. I\'m always glad to hear from you. Until next time!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I CANNOT BELIEVE THE HOLIDAY\'S OVER ALREADY!

>> correct!
I feel not really satisfied with what I did during the holidays.

>> I wasn\'t really satisfied with what I did during the holidays.
Becuz it\'s not enough!

>> Because it wasn\'t enough.
Actually, I slept too much. That caused this disappointment in the end.

>> correct!
First day, I went to motorcycle tour with my friends.

>> On the first day, I went to a motorcycle tour with my friends.

That was the best day among those holidays.

>> correct!

I really enjoyed the winding course which normally I was a little afraid before.

>> I really enjoyed the winding course which was normally a little scary for me.

I felt my motorcycle getting more comfortable to deal with.

>> I felt I\'m getting more comfortable in dealing with my motorcycle.

And the weather killed. It was awesome.

>> The weather was a killer! It was awesome.

I was wearing leather jacket all day long but it was not hot at all with cool air.

>> I was wearing leather jacket all day long but it was not hot at all because the air was cool.
And the second day, becuz of the previous day 12 hours riding, I was not even able to walk properly, so I stayed at home all day long.

>> We rode our bikes for 12 hours the previous day so on the second day I wasn\'t even able to walk properly, so I stayed at home all day long.
And the next day it was Chuseok day, but I didn\'t visit anyone, just went to see my boyfriend. I desperately wanted to ride motorcyle again, but....ㅠㅠ

>> correct!
Anyway, I was glad and felt sorry at the same time with mixed feeling, cuz he prepared some Chuseok gift for my parents even though he\'s ....

>> Anyway, I was glad and felt sorry at the same time, I had mixed feelings, \'cause he prepared some Chuseok gift for my parents even though he\'s ....

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