What I did for the first time in a while
학생이 쓴 원문
So sorry I was absent today... I have no excuse for it haha...\'cause I found myself sleeping again right before the class started.
강사 첨삭
Great day, [이름] !!!
The most important thing is trying your best. I know you can really learn from our daily activities. Be confident in speaking English because you can see yourself speaking the language well in days to come.
Have a great day~~~
Talk to you tomorrow and always be positive.
T. Jeny
Sometimes I wonder if a sunny day really exists then, there are day when I know it does. >>Sometimes I wonder if sunny days really exist then, there are days when I knew it does. It was yesterday that the sunny day let me realize how I had been doing. >>It was a sunny day yesterday so it let me realized what I had been doing. I used to walk around, sometimes relaxing on a bench in a park soaking up the sun. >>I used to walk around, sometimes relaxing on a bench at the park under the sun. That was how I enjoyed myself on a sunny day. >>That\'s how I enjoy myself on a sunny day One fine spring day, I, who forgot that I used to like a sunny day, was looking at the sun from a window in my room when I felt as if the sun invited me to sit with it outside at a park. >>One fine spring day, I, who forgot to like sunny days, was looking at the sun from a window in my room when I felt as if the sun is inviting me to go outside the park and sit at the bench. That was how I decided to ride around one of those Han River Parks for the first time in a while. >>So I decided to ride around one of those Han River Parks for the first time in a while. I contacted one of my friends ask if you will be available and if so, to make plans for it, and then I had success. >>I contacted one of my friends and asked if he\'s available. If so we will make a plan thus we succeeded. Our plans were perfect as well as the weather was perfect. >>Our plans were perfect as well as the weather. But we had a small problem, renting one of the two bikes over the app called \'따릉이\' on our smart phone since I had never learned how to use it. >>But we had a small problem renting two bikes over the app called, \'Ttare\' on our smartphone; I didn\'t know how to use it. It took a little longer to rent it than I thought it would but somehow we made it. >>It took a long time for us to do the rental but somehow we made it. Afterwards, we had to walk our bikes down to the park because there were so many cars waiting for the lights to change and so were a lot of people. >>Afterwards, we had to walk our bikes down to the park because there were so many cars waiting for the street light and there were a lot of people. Half way through our ride, we found ourselves far from the park where we had started riding. >>Halfway through our ride, we found ourselves far from the park where we had started biking. But we didn\'t care less because the bikes didn\'t have to be back to where they had been. >>But we didn\'t care less because the bikes didn\'t have to be returned where we borrowed it from. We had late lunch at a restaurant famous for its braised spicy chicken that had been catching on the internet lately. >>correct All we did was talk about the fine, windy but hardly cold, sunny day. >>All we did was talk about the fine, and windy but hardly cold, sunny day. Both of us were really happy about it and a little sorry that we didn\'t have enough time to be relaxed near there. >>Both of us were really happy about it and a little sorry for we didn\'t have enough time to relax near the area. But we decided to keep it that way because too much is as bad as too little, meaning that was just good enough, and to have a small talk over a coffee before we said bye-bye, see you around! >>But we decided to keep it that way because too much is as bad as too little, meaning, it was just good enough. Thus we had a small talk over coffee before we said bye-bye, see you around! On the way back home, I wondered when a day like today would come again and I hoped it would be on one of the weekends. >>On my way back home, I wondered when would a day like this come again and I hoped it would be soon.So sorry I was absent today... I have no excuse for it haha...\'cause I found myself sleeping again right before the class started.
>>So sorry I was absent today. I have no excuse for it because I found myself sleeping again right before the class starts.
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