What I did not like about my school

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1. The things I did not really like about my school is... Most of the time, the weather in Penn State is pretty bad like it snows a lot so sometimes they cancel the class to prevent car accidents due to a lot of kids drive to school.

>>The things I didn\'t really like about my school is that, most of the time, the weather in the state of Pennsylvania.

2. Furthermore, they sometimes turn on the AC during early winter which makes the room so cold.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I find it strange that they turn on the AC in early winter.

3. I feel like a lot of people from there, they naturally like cold temperature.

>>I feel like a lot of people there naturally like cold temperatures.

4. They wear a tank top with a short even when the temperature drop down the freezing point.

>>They wear tank tops with shorts even when the temperature drops to the freezing point.

5. During summer, I understand turning on the AC but during fall they still turn that on and the funny thing is residents there they still think the room is warm.

>>I understand why they turn on the AC in summer but even in fall, they still turn it on. The funny thing is that residents there still think the room is warm.

6. Therefore, I bring a really thick jacket all the time so that I can use it as a blanket when I am taking classes.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Consequently, I bring a thick jacket to use as a blanket when I take classes.

7. Besides that, everything is perfect.

>>CORRECT!

>>Otherwise, everything is perfect.