What I did on last Saturday
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On last Saturday(1/6), I met my friendly coworkers-\"The Cuties\"-.
>> Last Saturday(1/6), I met my friendly coworkers, \"The Cuties\".
First, We went to a conveyor-belt sushi restaurant. We enjoyed many kind of sushi.
>>First, we went to a conveyor-belt sushi restaurant. We enjoyed many kinds of sushi.
The sushi I enjoyed most is mackerel sushi.
>> The sushi I enjoyed most was mackerel sushi.
Actually, I don\'t like mackerel because of smell. So I don\'t like fried mackerel.
>> Actually, I don\'t like mackerel because of its smell. So I don\'t like fried mackerel.
However, I realized that the fresh mackerel sushi doesn\'t have any smell!
>> CORRECT
So I ate two plates of mackerel sushi although it is expensive things in this restaurant!
>> So I ate two plates of mackerel sushi although it was one of the most expensive dishes in the restaurant!
After that, we had talking time at cafe with drinking coffees.
>> After that, we had talking time at a cafe while drinking coffee.
We chattered about 4~5 hours without knowing that time passed!
>> We chattered about 4~5 hours without knowing that time had passed!
I was pleased to having a good time with my friends.
>> I was pleased to have a good time with my friends.
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