What I did when I go to supermarket last weekend.
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First, I bought some fruits when I go to the supermarket.
Second, I experienced some video games when I went there.
Third, I bought some stuff when I went supermarket.
Lastly, I get out of the supermarket.
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First, I bought some fruits when I go to the supermarket.
First, I bought some fruits when I went to a supermarket.
Second, I experienced some video games when I went there.
>> Second, I played some video games.
Third, I bought some stuff when I went supermarket.
>> Third, I bought some other stuff.
Lastly, I get out of the supermarket.
>> Then I left.
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