what I do during free time at home

2011-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I usually sleep or watch TV. There are many korean drama so watching a television is very funny. I really like the program which is about animals. I think watching a television is very enjoyable thing. And during free time at home I also take a nap only for 1hour. Taking a nap is very usefull to me. After a slight nap I'm refreshed. I CAN'T REMEMBER THE HOMEWORK YOU GAVE ME........OH MY GOD!ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

강사 첨삭

Hi John,

I like to take a nap too..^^ I hope I can get a nap as much as I want to.

Have a great day! Here are some corrections.

Teacher May

I usually sleep or watch TV.

>>I usually sleep or watch TV to reduce stress.

There are many korean drama so watching a television is very funny.

>>There are many Korean drama so watching a television is very funny/fun.
I really like the program which is about animals.

>>I really like programs about animals.
I think watching a television is very enjoyable thing.

>>I think watching a television is a very enjoyable thing to do.
And during free time at home I also take a nap only for 1hour.

> >During my free time at home I also take a nap for an hour.
Taking a nap is very usefull to me.

>>Taking a nap is very useful to me.
After a slight nap I'm refreshed.

>>CORRECT

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