What I do for free time
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Because I am senior grade in my Uni, so I am busy preparing a lot of thing such as certificate, resume and so on. But, I think a balance between work and rest is very important. Normally, I prefer to watch some videos in Youtube because there are lots of different types of videos and it makes me forget the other things and relieve a pressure. In addition, it can be also helpful to get information about getting a job because I\'ve already subscribed several channel which is related to getting a job.
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Hi Jay,
You are much appreciated for taking the time to work on the homework I gave you despite your busy schedule. Have a great weekend. ^ ^
- Rachel
Because I am senior grade in my Uni, so I am busy preparing a lot of thing such as certificate, resume and so on. But, I think a balance between work and rest is very important.
>> Because I am in my senior year in the university, I am busy preparing a lot of things such as certificates and resume, but I think a balance between work and rest is very important.
Normally, I prefer to watch some videos in Youtube because there are lots of different types of videos and it makes me forget the other things and relieve a pressure.
>> Normally, I prefer to watch videos on YouTube because there various types to choose from, and they relieve me from pressure and other burdens.
In addition, it can be also helpful to get information about getting a job because I\'ve already subscribed several channel which is related to getting a job.
>> correct
>> Furthermore, they are useful for acquiring information about jobs; thus, I subscribed to some channels.
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