what I do in morning to evening
학생이 쓴 원문
In morning, I go to my school in 8:45.
In afternoon, I eat lunch in school and go back to my home, and eat my snack. And I go to my math academy.
In evening, I do my homework and play video game, and I go to bed in 11:00.
It is so fun.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! You have answered
the question appropriately. Your homework is well-organized
and easy to understand. Awesome! However, you have to focus on articles and prepositions. Use the preposition AT when talking about an exact time. Alright?
- Teacher Debbie
>> In the morning, I go to my school at 8:45.
In afternoon, I eat lunch in school and go back to my home, and eat my snack.
>> In the afternoon, I eat lunch in school and go back to my home and eat my snack.
And I go to my math academy.
>> I also go to my math academy.
In evening, I do my homework and play video game, and I go to bed in 11:00.
>> In the evening, I do my homework and play a video game, and I go to bed at 11:00.
It is so fun.
>> This is a good sentence.
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