What I do in spring and summer
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I go to see the Cherry Blossoms.
That is because Cherry Blossoms are so beautiful.
I go to swimming pool in summer.
That is because swimming pool is very cool.
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- Teacher Debbie
I go to see the Cherry Blossoms.
>> I go to a flower festival to see cherry blossoms.
That is because Cherry Blossoms are so beautiful.
>> That is because cherry blossoms are so beautiful.
I go to swimming pool in summer.
>> I go to a swimming pool in summer.
That is because swimming pool is very cool.
>> That is because the swimming pool is very cool.
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