What I do in winter
학생이 쓴 원문
When winter, I will play snowball fight.
That is because making snowball is easy.
Second, I will make snowman.
That is because rolling snowball is very fun.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing about the things you do in winter. I wish I could play in the snow, too.
- Teacher Debbie
>> In winter, I play snowball fight.
That is because making snowball is easy.
>> That is because making snowballs is easy.
Second, I will make snowman.
>> I also make a snowman.
That is because rolling snowball is very fun.
>> That is because rolling snowballs is very fun.
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