What I do when I feel stressed.
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Hello [이름]! Oh! I saw your answers to the homework now. I appreciate you sharing your stress relievers and I think we have the same things to do when we feel stressed. You have very good sentence construction, although I just noticed one error in some sentences. Anyway, please take time to review my sentence recommendations too. Thank you very much again! See you in our class! ^^,
When I feel stressed, I usually listen to music.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR Listening to music is one of my stress relievers.
It\'s because it keeps me calm without thinking complicated things.
>>> It\'s because it keeps me calm without thinking about complicated things.
Sometimes I talk on the phone with my friend.
>>> Sometimes, I also talk to my friend on the phone.
It makes me feel better.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR It makes me feel relaxed.
Sleeping is also a good way to relieve stress.
>>> Another way to relieve stress is by sleeping.
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