What I do when I have some annoying thing.
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First, when I have some annoying thing, I play video games.
Second, when I have some annoying thing, I go outside.
Third, when I have some annoying thing, I read a comic book.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This is nice to know about how you handle things when you are being annoyed. Great idea! Keep safe and see you soon!
~T. Annie
First, when I have some annoying thing, I play video games.
>>First, when I am annoyed by something, I play video games.
Second, when I have some annoying thing, I go outside.
Second, when I have some annoying thing, I go outside.
>>Second, I go outside.
Third, when I have some annoying thing, I read a comic book.
Third, when I have some annoying thing, I read a comic book.
>>Third, I read a comic book.
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