What I Fear the Most. [The things that you are scared of or things that you would never want to happ
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Good Tuesday to you Sir [이름]!
How are you doing today?
I hope you had enough sleep last night.
Me, too. But what I am really scared of is that my parents are getting older.
I hope that they will have a long life.
I want to be with my parents until I get old.
I know that is somewhat impossible, but I always pray that they will have a healthy and long life.
Anyway, thank you so much for your time.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I might fear getting older.
>> I might fear of getting older.
Aging such as getting more wrinkles on my face and weakened my body is not what I’m afraid of.
>> Aging such as getting more wrinkles on my face and weakening of my body is not what I’m afraid of.
I can understand and accept the fact that my organs will be getting deteriorated and eventually get sick as time goes by.
>> I can understand and accept the fact that my organs will deteriorate and eventually get sick as time goes by.
Without a doubt, I will be having health problems more and more.
>> Without a doubt, I will have more health problems.
We all have to face mortality.
>> correct
It is understandable.
>> correct
However, what I’m really scared of is facing death all of a sudden without being prepared.
>> correct
I’m living at this moment without thinking of death.
>> correct
We are already busy with our daily routine.
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We don’t have time to think about our life, death, how to live, etc.
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We put them away as if they have nothing to do with our lives or even if we do, they are not the priority on my to-do list.
>> We put them away as if they have nothing to do with our lives or even if we do, they are not the priority on our to-do list.
A day, a week, a month, and a year will go away quietly without being recognized.
>> correct
And one day we might find ourselves standing in the finish line of our life.
>> correct
Looking back at the terminus of our life, we might realize and regret the time passed.
>> correct
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