What I feel about company meetings
학생이 쓴 원문
What I feel about company meetings is annoyed. I don\'t think all of the meetings are necessary. A few of meetings can be skipped and send emails. If we decrease the meetings we will increase the work process rate.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Thomas!
I agree with your thoughts about company meetings. Since all of the people there are professionals, they should be able to communicate their thoughts and professional ideas via email so that employees can reduce time travelling or meeting people unnecessarily.
Please study the use of \'the\' carefully. In addition, stay consistent with your verbs and their tenses. Nevertheless, you did an excellent job on this homework!
See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> What I feel about the company meetings is being annoyed.
I don\'t think all of the meetings are necessary.
>> Correct!
A few of meetings can be skipped and send emails.
>> A few of the meetings can be skipped and sent via emails.
If we decrease the meetings we will increase the work process rate.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
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