What I feel when I lose at sport game.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I have sorry feel that is because sports games are very important.
Second, I have an angry feel when winners are teasing were a team.
Third, I have a firm feel That is because they fail is the mother about winning.
Last, I have a sad feeling that is because when I lose at the game, some sports are eliminated there.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Thank you for being honest about how you feel when you lose. However, remember that sports are not just about winning. They are about having fun.
- Teacher Debbie
>> First, I feel sorry because sports games are very important for me.
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>> First, I feel sorry because sports games are vital for me.
Second, I have an angry feel when winners are teasing were a team.
>> Second, I get angry when the winners tease my team.
Third, I have a firm feel That is because they fail is the mother about winning.
>> I\'m sorry. What do you mean?
Last, I have a sad feeling that is because when I lose at the game, some sports are eliminated there.
>> Lastly, I feel sad because when I lose at a game, I get eliminated from that game.
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