What I focused to cultivate now.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am focusing on speaking English more fluently and taking a Toeic test.
I\'m somewhat nervous because of getting scores on Toeic.
It\'s been a long time to take a test and on the other hand, I think it is an opportunity to see myself more objectively.
It is the start state I think, so I will have to practice more.
I want to study more both continuously and effectively so that I can teach well in my class.
Sometimes I hurry a little bit, but I realized it isn\'t important how fast I am, but where I am going to while I am running.
I run for 50 minutes. During that time, I can either run or walk. I can finish running anyway. but the result is different from how I have done. So, I\'ll enjoy this course and concentrate on it.
So, nowadays I am cultivating exercising and studying English.
Because If I don\'t cultivate my physical power, I can\'t endure this study course.
So, I wanna overcome everything as possible as I can do in front of me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Juliet!
Everything you wrote was great!
You are definitely getting better.
I can see more potential as days pass.
Sincerely
T. James.
I am focusing on speaking English more fluently and taking a Toeic test.
>>> CORRECT
I\'m somewhat nervous because of getting scores on Toeic.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s been a long time to take a test and on the other hand, I think it is an opportunity to see myself more objectively.
>> It\'s been a long time that I didn\'t take a test, on the other hand, it is an opportunity to see myself more objectively.
It is the start state I think, so I will have to practice more.
>>> CORRECT
I want to study more both continuously and effectively so that I can teach well in my class.
>>> CORRECT
Sometimes I hurry a little bit, but I realized it isn\'t important how fast I am, but where I am going to while I am running.
>>> CORRECT
I run for 50 minutes. During that time, I can either run or walk. I can finish running anyway. but the result is different from how I have done. So, I\'ll enjoy this course and concentrate on it.
>>> I run for 50 minutes. During that time, I can either run or walk. I can finish running anyway. But the result is different from how I have done. So, I\'ll enjoy this course and concentrate on it.
So, nowadays I am cultivating exercising and studying English.
>>> CORRECT
Because If I don\'t cultivate my physical power, I can\'t endure this study course.
>>> CORRECT
So, I wanna overcome everything as possible as I can do in front of me.
>>> CORRECT
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