What i have accomplished so far and what the challenges i am facing?
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The accomplishment that i achieve so far is not really special but just normal.
When i was young, i thought i might be a special person when i turn to 29.
For example an competent career woman who is working at the giant company and probably she has a car and own her house. HOWEVER, the real life was a totally different that i expected.
I just get the job when i was 25 and work as a normal, live with my parents and have no car!
I think it is not really special but i am satisfied with my life, even if i couldn\'t accomplish the special thing.
Because, sometimes, \"unextraordinary\" means the stable.
At the same time, the challenges i\'m facing is the health. Lately, i broke my ankle so i couldn\'t move well. I have to use a pair of crutches when i walk. It is really uncomfortable. i thought i\'m really health before the accident so i skipped the meal often. I guess it made me unhealthy, so i try to recover, eat the meal regularly and have the vitamins. I really hope to get better soon!
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen,
Achievement is more important than material or financial reward. Achieving the aim or task gives greater personal satisfaction than receiving praise or recognition. Achievement-motivated people constantly seek improvements and ways of doing things better.
Hard times stimulate growth in a way that good times don\'t. Facing challenges and navigating one\'s way through them builds resilience capacity. Knowing that one can overcome obstacles, learn from struggles, and benefit from mistakes lays a solid foundation for success in later life. And the ability to overcome challenges also brings forth a sense of confidence that isn\'t found anywhere else. Do not be afraid of life\'s curveballs. Treat every challenge as important learning, and always believe in your power to overcome it. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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The accomplishment that i achieve so far is not really special but just normal.
When i was young, i thought i might be a special person when i turn to 29.
For example an competent career woman who is working at the giant company and probably she has a car and own her house. HOWEVER, the real life was a totally different that i expected.
I just get the job when i was 25 and work as a normal, live with my parents and have no car!
I think it is not really special but i am satisfied with my life, even if i couldn\'t accomplish the special thing.
>> The accomplishment that I achieve so far is not really special but just normal.
When I was young, I thought I might be a special person when I turn to 29.
For example, a competent career woman who is working at a giant company and probably she has a car and own her house. However, real life was totally different from what I expected.
I just get the job when I was 25 and work as a normal, live with my parents, and have no car!
I think it is not really special but I am satisfied with my life, even if I couldn\'t accomplish the special thing.
Because, sometimes, \"unextraordinary\" means the stable.
At the same time, the challenges i\'m facing is the health. Lately, i broke my ankle so i couldn\'t move well. I have to use a pair of crutches when i walk. It is really uncomfortable. i thought i\'m really health before the accident so i skipped the meal often. I guess it made me unhealthy, so i try to recover, eat the meal regularly and have the vitamins. I really hope to get better soon!
>> Because, sometimes, \"unextraordinary\" means stable.
At the same time, the challenge I\'m facing is my health condition now. Lately, I broke my ankle so I couldn\'t move well. I have to use a pair of crutches when I walk. It is really uncomfortable. I thought I\'m really healthy before the accident so I skipped the meal often. I guess it made me unhealthy, so I try to recover, eat the meal regularly and have vitamins. I really hope to get better soon!
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The accomplishment that i achieve so far is not really special but just normal.
When i was young, i thought i might be a special person when i turn to 29.
For example an competent career woman who is working at the giant company and probably she has a car and own her house. HOWEVER, the real life was a totally different that i expected.
I just get the job when i was 25 and work as a normal, live with my parents and have no car!
I think it is not really special but i am satisfied with my life, even if i couldn\'t accomplish the special thing.
Because, sometimes, \"unextraordinary\" means the stable.
At the same time, the challenges i\'m facing is the health. Lately, i broke my ankle so i couldn\'t move well. I have to use a pair of crutches when i walk. It is really uncomfortable. i thought i\'m really health before the accident so i skipped the meal often. I guess it made me unhealthy, so i try to recover, eat the meal regularly and have the vitamins. I really hope to get better soon!
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