what I have to do today?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was not busy this week. and today is same.
My boss, you know the grumpy guy, went to the National Assembly early
morning for the Budget deliberations for our company.
According to the fact, I am free today.
um...what I have to do to day?
You know the more I have a time in my life, the difficult I decide to
do something.
So I'm seriously thinking about finding what I will be doing today.
First, I'll review our class it makes me to study more.
And then I'll prepare my part time job.
lastly, It is my favorite thing. I'll read a book.
Actually the lovely guest which is the book ordered by me yesterday,
just invited me while I am writing to you.
For now I know what I have to do.
I'll be on the world of book made by me.
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Happy Friday girl!!! Well there you go. You found something where you can spend your free time. I hope you'll have a good time reading the book and tell me about it on Monday okay. Enjoy your weekend as always and try not to argue with your boyfriend this time. Ha ha just joking. See you on Monday!!!
Lei J
I was not busy this week.
>>correct
and today is same.>>and today is the same.My boss, you know the grumpy guy, went to the National Assembly early this morning for the Budget deliberations for our company.>>correctAccording to the fact, I am free today.>>With this fact, I am free today.um...what I have to do to day? >>ummm What do I have to do today?You know the more I have a free time, the more difficult I decide to do something.>>correctSo I'm seriously thinking about finding what I will be doing today.>>correctFirst, I'll review our class it makes me to study more.>>correctAnd then I'll prepare for my part time job.>>correctlastly, It is my favorite thing. I'll read a book.>>correctActually the lovely guest which is the book ordered by me yesterday,just invited me while I am writing to you.>>Actually, the lovely guest which I ordered yesterday, was inviting me to read it me while I was writing this composition.For now I know what I have to do.>>correctI'll be on the world of book made by me.
>>I'll be in my fantasy world.
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